But, why I insist in keeping you informed about all the insignificant details of my daily existence? Ha! That’s what I was thinking about when I was doing chores.
The reason came to me. How? The more I publish these minute details in thousands of words? The more you all shoot me an ‘awesome’.
Sometimes? I think you are just humoring me, but then again? I got my first solid positive critique from a professional. I tell you? I wanted to cry for joy!
Father? You are so clever! All these years You have been preparing me for this epic year of 2017, but! It’s already November, no big ending has come to pass.
- I thought You had missed it somewhere along the line. Silly me! When will I cease contemplating such preposterous possibilities? Your promises. Your doings. Your ways?
- Totally way over my silly mind, but! That does not perturb You in the least. Despite my silliness? You continue to fulfill Your plan of restoration for the original intent of my creation. What a marvel!
Dear Reader, know what? We were created to be loved and to love in return, but! I have never really understood the meaning of that sentence. The truth?
The concept about love ingrained in my mind from birth until death do I part? WRONG! Not really a clue of the deep meaning of such love as the love of our Creator—the love of our Creator for us human beings—His created children.
Clueless I remained perhaps until this moment, but! Little by little, incident by incident? Father demonstrates His love to me.
There you have it, dear reader. That’s why all the details that you all find ‘awesome’! Anyhow? Father sent me to Lorelle WordPress School. For what?
To get me His diploma, I guess. After the following critique of my website? I believe to be on my way to graduation already! Hahaha! The truth? My head is about to explode! Mainly out of amazement with our Father’s doings.
Lorelle VanFossenOwner
+thiaBasilia Licona excellent! However, it’s hard to read when I’m greeted with explanations and excuses. Dump those and get to the point. Your writing and thoughts are brilliant and we want those, not a warning that this is a long pot. Kills the mood. Lol.
I’m having trouble reading and tracking your posts. I understand that you are writing in a journal format, but you have multiple days in a single post. I recommend that it is broken up by dates, with one per post, to make it easier to follow. You also have huge blocks of bold and italic, which are both very hard to read. You probably haven’t gotten to that part in my tutorials, but it’s important to understand about readability and how to make the process be enjoyable for the reader as well as for the writer.
Your use of images is great. I’m not finding the about or the contact page. And these come very early in the lessons. Keep working on it. You started out fantastic. Keep going
Dear Reader, would I had found this school before? Lorelle would not quite been able to appreciate the content of the site, much less give me such outstanding feedback on the site.
